
EPPIE 2009 Best Horror
It’s every author’s dream – to get that book published, to see your name printed on the cover. Ben Larken finally got that sensation with PIT-STOP, his debut novel – described by reviewer Geoff Nelder as “an extraordinary horror/thriller”. But for Ben something else happened, something not every author achieves. His debut book became an award winner. PIT-STOP was crowned EPPIE 2009 Best Horror at EPICon in March 2009 in Las Vegas.
With Ben’s next book THE HOLLOWS released tomorrow (Friday 20th), let’s take a look at PIT-STOP and see why it’s so good.
PIT-STOP takes place at a quiet roadside diner on Arizona’s scenic route 66. Officer Scott Alders finds himself over a cup of joe, staring at the reflections in his spoon. Trouble is, he soon realises he’s not quite sure why he’s there, or how he got there. Looking around, he sees everyone else with the same half-dazed lost look. One by one, they begin to come to themselves and through Holly, the unconcerned waitress, they learn that the Pit-Stop Grill is not your everyday roadside diner. It’s a layover while they wait for a bus, and a gruesome demonic driver. The door is sealed, and the Pit-Stop Grill is the one place you don’t want to be, it’s the last stop on the road to Hell.
Amidst fears, doubts, and denial, the ten occupants try to band together to fight against the seeming inevitable, and against RAMSEY, the bus-driver gifted with the powers of Satan to bring all to his side in Hades.
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Get on the bus...
“Holly,” he said with a voice infuriatingly calm. “Please show your customers what happens when they refuse to get on the bus.”
Even through the nerves stretching Holly’s face, her expression dropped. She didn’t move at first. Then, with noticeable strain, her hand lifted to her blouse. She unbuttoned the top button, then the next one. She stopped.
“Ramsey, please,” she whispered. “Please don’t make me.”
He replied like a parent softly disciplining a child. “Holly, show the people what happens when you don’t get on the bus.”
She closed her eyes as a line of mascara ran down her cheek. She unclasped the next button and pulled open her blouse.
“Oh, crap,” Bill said. He was the only one who spoke. Cassie let out a small whimper.
Everyone else could barely breathe as they stared at the cavity where Holly’s chest should have been. The skin was gone. Instead there were mold-covered ribs and even darker things lurking beneath. Decrepit organs like fist-sized raisins writhed and pumped under the bones. Holly closed her blouse as quickly as she opened it.
“Thank you, Holly,” Ramsey said. “You may go now.”
The waitress lowered her head and stepped into the backroom with her hand over her mouth trying to stifle the sobs. Ramsey the bus driver revolved slowly on the bar stool, turning toward them.
“Now,” he said with a sigh. “Get on the bus or suffer the same wrath.”
“No,” Scott answered, his voice cracking. “Don’t listen to him. He can’t get us all. We have to stick together.”
Ramsey puckered his lips. “Such a valiant path. And yet, it’s never succeeded.”
Scott didn’t move, though Dustin could see a slight tremble in his legs. Then he realized he was trembling, too. They all were, as if an electric current passed through the group.
“You’re going down!” Bill cried, throwing his baseball cap aside. He ran at the driver, yelling a wordless battle cry, his fists raised and ready as he stampeded toward the albino perched on the bar stool. Ramsey never got up. He lifted one ghostly finger and touched Bill’s fist as it dived toward him.
Bill fell over howling in pain.
He landed on his side then rolled onto his back, shrieking like a banshee. A large circle of red appeared on the drunk driver’s chest. The stain deepened, making trenches of crimson in his shirt as a “Y” shape bled into the center of the circle, resembling a peace sign or a—
“A steering wheel?” Dustin said.
“Very good, Mr. Calloway,” Ramsey said, nodding respectfully. “Bill’s car didn’t have an airbag, and I’m afraid he was too drunk to remember his seatbelt. He died instantly, impaled on his own steering wheel. Such a shame, as you can see.”
Bill screamed. Janine buried her face in Dustin’s shirt. He couldn’t blame her. Bill Myers’ chest was collapsing in front of them. Bones crinkled and snapped like popcorn popping. And yet Bill kept screaming. His lungs should have been punctured. His esophagus had to be tattered ribbons.
Scott was thinking the same thing. “How is he still yelling? Why isn’t he dead yet?”
“He can’t die,” Dustin said. “He’s already dead.”
Ramsey leaned over Bill without getting off his barstool. “Would you like to get on the bus now?”
“Yes!” Bill cried and the moment he said it the blood disappeared from his shirt and his chest re-inflated. His screaming snapped off like a switch. He looked down at his body through tear-filled eyes.
“I would hurry if I were you,” Ramsey said.
Bill didn’t need further convincing. He leapt to his feet and ran outside, racing for the bus. It welcomed him into its black stomach with cryptic silence.
The bus driver rose from the barstool and stretched. His spine cracked and sounded like twigs snapping. He yawned, revealing shimmering, blood-caked teeth, and turned to the others.
“Who’s next?”
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Perhaps we all wonder what happens when we die. Is there a place such as Purgatory? Are we all answerable for our sins? It’s a place we never want to find ourselves in, but our heroes are there seem to face an impossible task in escaping RAMSEY. Faced with their own fears and reflecting on their own lives, they turn to each other for help.
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The outside lights snapped on. “Pit-Stop Grill” blinked in sizzling red neon as the fluorescent lamps cast a dull sheen over the gas pumps. Sprinting between the two pumps was Laura, blood-drenched and screaming, running toward the infinite highway. Scott watched through the window, feeling her terror. He could barely repress the scream inside himself.
“Laura!” Janine yelled, standing next to him. “Don’t leave me!”
Suddenly, the bus swooped around the side of the building like a shimmering bullet, targeting its prey and going in for the kill. The engine ripped and revved, sending tremors through the whole diner. Laura half-ran, half-staggered onto the blacktop, looking exhausted and vulnerable.
“Hide!” Janine screamed. “Laura, hide!”
“Where?” Dustin said. “There’s nowhere to go.”
Scott’s hand was on his pistol before he even formed the thought. He brushed past Janine, Dustin and Cassie, heading for the door.
“What are you doing?” Dustin shouted after him. “You can’t kill him!”
“No, but if I can slow Holly down, maybe I can give Laura enough time to get back.” He ran through the doorway, noticing how Janine had no complaints about his righting the wrongs this time.
A wave of disorientation hit him as Scott crossed over the threshold. He staggered, realizing it was because he was leaving the diner. Whatever spell the place had on their collective souls snapped off in an instant, and Scott was suddenly struck by how alone he felt. The terror inside swelled, bordering on hysteria. The soothing, hypnotic pull of the Pit-Stop was gone. Being outside the walls of the Pit-Stop felt like being strapped to the nose of the diving plane, watching the ground fly up to meet him.
Laura screamed and Scott tried to focus. The bus was almost to her. The white beams of its headlights soon found her and Scott watched in horror as Laura’s exposed legs and arms began to sizzle and smoke. The mammoth vehicle followed her path exactly, and for a second Scott thought they were all dead. The bus careened toward the two gas pumps, as if to weave between them like Laura had and Scott braced himself for the explosion that was sure to follow. But the jet black bus hit the pumps and passed through them like a ghost unfazed by the laws of reality. Scott wondered if the same would be true when the bus reached Laura. Would it pass through her and continue down the highway?
The answer soon came. The bus didn’t veer into her. It spun into her. The back end lifted off the blacktop, whipped around and the effect was like a homerun smack. Scott cringed at the sound as the bus found her. With a hollow thock, Laura flew back the way she came, landing with a metallic clang against the gas pump to his left. Scott watched her twitch and spasm, her white clothing now completely blood stained. Somewhere behind him, Janine screamed.
Scott ran. The pumps were only yards away but the distance felt overwhelming. He sprinted harder. In his periphery he could see the bus wasn’t moving. It had stopped in the middle of the highway, satisfied its prey wasn’t going anywhere. But if Scott could get to her first he could drag her back into the diner.
Then he felt the pull.
The power was all-consuming, a telepathic storm with hurricane-force winds. Every other thought evaporated. Scott stared past the gas pumps to the bus, its shimmering black windows beckoning him forward. He could hear the vibration coming off the glass, demanding his submission. He was helpless against it. His eyes widened helplessly and he stumbled toward the bus.
The bus was too big, too commanding, and he walked toward his new home feeling the pull strengthen with every step. With that sword-drawing sound, the drawbridge door on the side of the bus lowered. He stared at the blackness inside, broken only by a pair of red eyes gazing out of the darkness. The eyes welcomed him. He was almost there.
Fingers wrapped around his hand.
The moment he felt their touch, the psychic pull slackened making Scott look down and break contact with the floating red eyes. Laura’s bloody fingers had a death grip on him, but there was power coming through those fingers—enough power for the terror of the moment to flood back into him.
Her face was crumpled on one side, the bones of her skull splintered and her flesh a bloody pulp. Her body looked more like a pile of smoldering kindling, legs and arms thrown over each other like branches in a fire pit. With her one good eye, she gazed up at him.
“Get Janine out,” she sputtered, blood flowing down her chin. “Get her away from here…Please.”
Scott heard a footstep. And then another. Ramsey was coming. Scott didn’t look back. He didn’t have to. He didn’t want to look at the bus at all. Whatever power Laura Decker passed on to him would be wasted if he did. Instead he nodded at Laura. Her good eye seemed to soften then rolled back in its socket as her fingers slid away from his.
Scott ran harder than he ever remembered running in his lifetime. Ahead, the Pit-Stop Grill waited, getting closer but not fast enough. His terror only increased as he stared at the windows, realizing he couldn’t see Dustin, Cassie or Janine in them. What he did see made his stomach bottom out.
The bell tinkled and the front door—the only door into the Pit-Stop—pulled itself shut.
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In times of total despair, in times when you feel everything is lost, hope can be the one thing that drives you forward. Hope sometimes brings opportunity, and for our survivors battling against the dark forces, opportunity is what they need.
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No one else said anything. Janine’s eyes closed and made a steeple with her fingers. She looked deep in thought. Cassie’s eyes were closed too, but they cracked open every few seconds to make sure she wasn’t the only one. Dustin closed his eyes but could have been doing it from exhaustion. Scott stared at them all, thinking of wasted time.
God, he thought. I don’t know what I did to deserve this.
He couldn’t think of more. He stared at the ground, the blank sky, and then to his sides, his gaze jumping from boulder to boulder. He zeroed in on one of the larger stones, especially the chicken scratches on one of its flatter surfaces. His eyes widened.
“Wait…those aren’t scratches,” he whispered. “Those are words.”
The others looked up as Scott limped away from them, moving to the boulder. “Amen,” announced Cassie and got up quickly to follow him. Janine stayed where she was, her expression pinched in concentration.
Scott reached the boulder and leaned against it. The whitened scratches were words all right—small, poorly-formed words, possibly carved into the stone with a sharp pebble. He read silently while Cassie read aloud.
“My husband is D.B. Binder, notoreus thief and bank robber. He is respnsible for 20 heists along Route 66 and they say he is famus. For some reeson I am not, althoe I skeemed evry single one. I was the getaway driver too. But they wer waitin for us in Flagstaff. D.B. went in to the bank and never came out. Then they shot out the tires. So I ran until I got stuk climbin a sharp pole fince. The fince ript me open on the way down. And then I woke up here. In hell.
No one is awake. Their eyes are open but ther asleep. Even D.B. I waited til the bus came. While the othrs got on I ran. But now I’m tired and I can’t run anymor. I see anothr light a long way off. If I keep going maybe I can get outta here.
But if I can’t I wanted someone to reed this. I wanted someone to know I was the skeemer, not D.B. He was nothin speshal without me.
Holly Binder”
“Do you think it’s really Holly?” Cassie asked when she finished. “I mean, our Holly? Waitress Holly?”
“If I had to guess, I’d say yes,” Scott replied, running his fingers over the words. How long had it taken her to write this? She had been by herself, so how could she have written this much?
The answer that floated to the surface gave Scott chills. Ramsey had known she was gone. He had allowed her to finish. In his mind’s eye, Scott could see the bus driver at the top of the hill, watching with an amused smirk on his lips as she carved away. Or maybe it had been night and the entire bus had hovered silently over her, hidden in the darkness.
Cassie had different thoughts. “Did you read that?” She pointed to the words. “She saw a light a long way off, and it wasn’t the Pit-Stop Grill. There’s something else out there.”
“Something she never made it to,” Scott reminded her. “And we don’t know which direction she saw it in. It could be anywhere.”
“So what?” she cried. “It’s not like we don’t have all the time in the world. We just keep looking.”
“But we don’t have time,” he countered, feeling another bitter throb in his ankle. “Dustin’s getting worse.” And so am I, he wanted to say but didn’t.
“Then we follow your original plan,” came Dustin’s wheezy voice, and they turned to see the young man picking himself up off the ground. Janine rose quickly to give him support. Dustin leaned on her, keeping his bloodshot eyes on Scott. “We follow the highway. If there’s anything out there, it’ll be next to the highway.”
Cassie hooted. “Then let’s get this road trip started.”
“You guys can thank me later,” Janine smiled.
Scott arched an eyebrow. “Thank you for what?”
“My idea,” she said as she and Dustin hobbled past the boulder with Holly Binder’s Last Will and Testament etched into it. “You didn’t see that rock until after I started praying.”
Scott stayed where he was for a moment, watching them move farther into the ravine. He couldn’t decide if Janine was joking or dead serious. Staring at the hastily-scratched words he realized it was possible they had been led to this spot by a benevolent being.
But in the same breath, he new something darker could have just as easily left this message, something that was slowly setting them all up for a trap.
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Does the damned group finally escape the relentless pursuit of RAMSEY? Are they really all dead, as they think? You can see why PIT-STOP is such a popular book. If you pre-order THE HOLLOWS (gotta do it today, as it’s out tomorrow!) you’ll get the ebook of PIT-STOP free with it, or you can buy PIT-STOP itself, from LL-Publications, Amazon, Barnes & Noble, and many other good retailers.
BUT … answer this question and you could win your own signed copy of the 2009 EPPIE Best Horror, PIT-STOP! The best answer, in our view, will win the book.
“What, in your view, is the best book (apart from PIT-STOP, OF COURSE!) about Hell, Satan, Evil, etc., and why?”
Perhaps it’s a classic like The Exorcist, or The Omen, or another gem you’ve read or seen.
Jim Brown
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